All Comments on 'The Evening'

Read "The Cage" by whatdreamsmaycome if you want to see how idiotic this is.

Just a bunch of words. If you are going to write why not put a little effort into it.

WTF??? Post this where it belongs in fetish or better yet in the trash. 1.

you're just getting started so don't let assholes stop you from writing and posting.

most times if you check the ones commenting, they don't have anything posted to read. so keep writing

wimpy shit.

1* stories of the mentally ill aren't erotic

... just waiting to put new authors down. Don't pay them any heed; they won't even put their names to their snide comments and probably couldn't write anything nearly as good -- if they write at all.

This story should really have been in Fetish or BDSM but that is easily sorted. Please keep writing, and ignore the nonnies -- three stars from me for a good try. Welcome, thank you, and please write more.

Happy New Year!

Of course 1*

"1's" do matter when voting.

How sad to end the Year in LW with this lousy, misplaced story, no love, no respect, just two people into Fetish, BDSM, Gay, that just had been married to make their sexual deviations converge...1* (Where are the negative ratings when we need them?)

If you're not into it, then it is simply not a turn-on.

In my case, I read the second sentence and burst out laughing. Wrong category indeed. Humor/satire was my reaction.

Insane crap # 1 post in fetish

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Hygiene Problem

took the liberty to look at your bio. Before you bitch about anons, maybe you should put more info about yourself on your bio. No Answer, makes you a hypocrite. Like mentioned by another reader, it's the ass wipes like you that encourage trash stories. Think about it.

If they were available Impo, very few stories would make it beyond the "0" rating.

No comment or score on this one, comments said it all. Let's hope next year will bring a better class of writers.

Right. People comment on the story, you comment on the, and THEY'RE the assholes?

The anonymous, ugly, personal attacks and trashing of your story comments are coming from one deranged person. His/her commentary is consistent on all the LW new stories. Delete them and keep writing. 4*s.

You're laughable. So one is deranged to acknowledge a story of this type? I think since you protest so loudly it's you who is deranged. Anybody that favors this shit must be? Right? The same person you say? Maybe it's you?

where you can exhibit your brilliance, or your ass. Thanks for showing us at your best.

It is to provide enjoyment for the author.

Sometimes that enjoyment is merely in the pleasure of creating something. Sometimes it is in the pleasure of seeing his or her story published. Sometimes it is in getting a response from readers, via scores or comments. Sometimes it is to do more than just get a response -- it is to provoke. (I like provocation best.)

KatandGarry, you have certainly achieved a response from readers. It's fun to cause them such angst as you have done here. I hope you had fun doing it.

Lue

Ps. I didn't read the story. I don't read many LW stories nowadays. But the comments are always interesting.

Interesting observation. I can understand why you don't read to many loving wives stories, most don't pass the erotic smell test. lol I personally find the public feedback not only entertaining but also amusing, almost always better than the actual story,especially when a good verbal fight is waged between the readers. Everybody is bitch slapping each other, all over bad porn. Must be something deeper here, that evades me. (signed ML)

... says it all.

Happy New Yeah Cuck asshole!