All Comments on 'The Exception to the Rule'

This was exceptionally well written. Very professional. If you don’t write for a living you probably could.

Wow!! Great writing

Glad you enjoyed it! Lol i wish i could write for a living but got way too many bills to pay…

First class. Intense, honest and a beautiful friendship. Should be more of it.

I've never been used by a man, but this story has added a lot of fuel to that fantasy!

We are gonna need more bdsm stories please! Loved the writing. I read the next one, felt a tad repetitive (I guess that's party because it was written as a standalone) but still better than most. Only wish they were a bit longer

Good premise.

But too one sided.

He does stuff to her. She never does much to him.

Needed him telling her to play with his cock and balls, and then tell him what she was thinking while doing it.

Needed her begging him to put his cock in her pussy.

Some playing with her asshole would have been nice.

Three stars.

Such a great story!! I'm obsessed with the Lara & Josh dynamic. So well written and incredibly sexy. Really hope you write more.