All Comments on 'The Exchange Student'

I'm looking forward to seeing where you take this one. I'm wondering which way you will go: Trinka beds Aaron, probably loudly, Nicole thinks about it, then has him; or Nicole sneaks into Aaron's room, they have sex, and Trinka learns of it and a menage-a-trois ensues; or Trinka simply up-front says she wants Aaron, and Nicole chimes in with so does she, and hot sweaty monkey sex occurs all over the house until all are satiated ... which might take a long while with Trinka.

This is a fabulously done piece, especially the dialog for Trinka.

The pace of your tale, with Trinka planting seeds with both, works wonderfully. I am not really familiar with your work but enjoy the variety of situations you have made available to yourself, and we readers must follow to discover where you might take this

I liked the story and gave it a five.

I don't like that Anonymous wants to insert a negative comment on a story that is given freely to readers as a gift.

Please reject his pathetic attempt to be clever. I do.