All Comments on 'The Exchange Student Ch. 01'
by surrealmadrid
- 11 Comments
Anonymousabout 14 years agoI barely got past the grotesqeness of the 32F but was floored by the grammatical/spelling errors all over the place. Get real & get an editor.
Anonymousabout 14 years agothis is really a nice story, despite the grammar probs. good telling, weiting for more
Anonymousabout 14 years agogive it up or get help that was beyond belief. 32F indeed!!
Good night
Anonymousabout 14 years agoReal people, without implants, have 32F breasts. Mine were when I was 20, and even now they're 34E. This is the least ridiculous part of the story! It was fun which is all this is supposed to be!
Anonymousabout 14 years agoIgnore the other comments. This was amazing. Its not the grammer that matters but the effect it produces. Boy i blew my load on this. Keep writing. I need part two.
sexmateabout 14 years agoBut there's a firestorm brewing! I wouldn't want to be him when his wife finds out!
