by Volunteer_
I liked it a lot and I liked that there was good story and a ton of open directions to continue in future chapters, I look forward to reading them.
Five stars, despite the annoying countinual use of "passed" when you mean "past," as in "she walked passed me" (sic).
I liked much of the story, but the ending felt rushed and also left many plot threads unresolved. For examples, I would have liked to know more about Emma and Max, as well as James's efforts to turn the charity around.
Thanks for the comments! Yes, there will definitely be a part 2 and you’ll certainly know more about Emma in my next upload and Max in future chapters.
Thanks for pointing out the passed/past thing - I had missed that.
Volunteer
I definitely enjoyed this and am happy to see that there is a part two incoming.
5 stars and following.
A very enjoyable and engaging story with plenty of room for plot and character development.
Looking forward to Part 2!
I was starting to think that this was not going to happen, there were a lot of build up with lots of unnecessary information but you got it at the end.
Too many unanswered questions. What is the truth about his assistant? What will happen when James and the boss head north? What other office rumors will James discover? Etc., etc., etc.
Pointless, 1*
Moreover:
–if you can count it it’s fewer or more than
–if you must weigh it’s less than or more than