All Comments on 'The Extra Room'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Hoping for Chapter 2 soon

I like what I have read so far, I really hope you write another chapter

erotikoserotikosover 8 years ago
Outstanding!

Congratulations on a very well written story. The grammar, punctuation, spelling and syntax are quite good, and the erotica was exceptional. Clearly a five star effort. BTW, I liked the ending so well that I must paraphrase, "I hope you didn't just write one chapter in this story."

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