All Comments on 'The Eyes Have It'

Nice story, really liked it !

You did good on the romance ... try writing some more. Checked your other stories - not my thing. Still needs some proof reading but I read and ignore ... let the grammar police do their thing ... I just enjoy. Thanks.

I am a sucker for happy endings. Really enjoyed it.

wonderful story. Loved it.

Great story with decent character development, dialogue, and steady plot progression. 4.7*

Ah! Young love! Very nicely done. 5 stars

I enjoyed that, thank you. A nice simple romance with enough spice and uncertainty to keep it interesting. Four characters, two romances - very nicely done.

Excellent story!

5

Great story! I've enjoyed your other stories also. Please keep writing.

Excellent story. Really enjoyed how it came together!! Keep up the great writing and thanks for sharing!

Lovely to read a story in which the good guys do not get fucked over. Thanks

Well I'll be damned! Someone has actually heard of Cleveland State University! Class of 1975 here.

Great story I could certainly resonate with Doug.

Keep it coming, you keep writing and I'll keep reading!

Cheers

SAGE

fun story. well done

This was really great. Thanks for writing it