All Comments on 'The Eyes Have It'

by Fatdog25

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kaotic2kaotic24 months ago

This was really great. Thanks for writing it

clearcreekclearcreek4 months ago

fun story. well done

oldsage_1oldsage_16 months ago

Well I'll be damned! Someone has actually heard of Cleveland State University! Class of 1975 here.

Great story I could certainly resonate with Doug.

Keep it coming, you keep writing and I'll keep reading!

Cheers

SAGE

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Lovely to read a story in which the good guys do not get fucked over. Thanks

TomNJaxTomNJax8 months ago

Excellent story. Really enjoyed how it came together!! Keep up the great writing and thanks for sharing!

IEnjoyEroticaIEnjoyErotica10 months ago

Great story! I've enjoyed your other stories also. Please keep writing.

Boyd PercyBoyd Percy10 months ago

Excellent story!

5

des911des91110 months ago

I enjoyed that, thank you. A nice simple romance with enough spice and uncertainty to keep it interesting. Four characters, two romances - very nicely done.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Ah! Young love! Very nicely done. 5 stars

Demosthenes384bcDemosthenes384bc10 months ago

Great story with decent character development, dialogue, and steady plot progression. 4.7*

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

wonderful story. Loved it.

eomersoneomerson10 months ago

I am a sucker for happy endings. Really enjoyed it.

stewartbstewartb10 months ago

You did good on the romance ... try writing some more. Checked your other stories - not my thing. Still needs some proof reading but I read and ignore ... let the grammar police do their thing ... I just enjoy. Thanks.

alexetlaurealexetlaure10 months ago

Nice story, really liked it !

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