by texashorror
It was good for being so short. Like the other comment, I don't see how he would know Kelly had her eyes closed when she was shot if his were closed, too. Kind of sick, but still a good story about how you can do just about anything with the threat of dying looming before you.
Despite that I quite enjoyed it.
Excellent lines such as : I stood there for a lifetime, pulling away in my futility. made this a worthwhile read.
I was also impressed that he knew Kelly had her eyes closed when she was shot, despite the narrator's eyes being closed at the time.
Short, nasty, funny.