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Click here"You two are going to be such close friends."
For just a second, I saw a flicker of fear on Leah and Roberta's face. They were clearly terrified of what they were going to be made to do next.
Lady Grey took the stage one last time:
"It's time for lessons. Form up two lines behind Leah and Roberta."
We duly fell into line behind these two explosions of pink holding hands.
"This is how you will move between every lesson or face punishment. Now, get going. You have such a busy day ahead."
A green light showed the way out through the door. Leah and Roberta began to walk and I realised they must have been given painful lessons in how to move: they walked with such small steps, just how a proper and prissy young woman should.
With little other choice, we all followed.
Hi GrrrreatImagination, that's really good feedback, thanks! I've sent an update to the story with a warning at the top. Sorry about that, first time poster. Thanks again- Abi
Off to a decent start. I think it's worth continuing, and your writing skills are good enough to pull it off, I think.
My only suggestion would be to categorize it as Non-Consent/Reluctance, for obvious reasons. If you want to keep it in TG/CD, please put a little warning at the beginning.
Be well!
Oh, I felt like I was dropped off a cliff when the story did not continue . You certainly had my attention
I'm looking forward to the next chapter, or chapters. Like the young men, I'm excited to see what happens next.
Love it already please write more. I hope it gets more dark i would love to see them brainwash the captors.
So they target a bunch of gay guys, who are weak and will follow orders, to show them how to cross dress to become prostitutes. Why can't the MC feel like something is off so he doesn't show up for the bus, making them come after him, or he's undercover, trying to break the organization and he uses techniques he's learned, to fight their training every step of the way. It can end up wherever the writer wants, but these predictable tales are all alike. It would be fun to read a forced feminization story that had actual elements of being forced.