All Comments on 'The Faded Cross Insisted'

by NevillLongBOTTOM

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FailedscoutFailedscout3 months ago

Hot but short.

Thank you for writing and posting here.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

I like your writing style. Had a hearty chuckle at "Men tried to find that special someone to bury their cocks in".

This is Grade A appetizer. Please serve the main course too! I'm sooo hungry...

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Great start! Looking forward to more

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

too much of a build up to lead to nothing we need a part 2

Omegaman60Omegaman603 months ago

It's a beginning

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Definitely needs to continue

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Promising start

Definitely be interesting to see what happens next to the birthday boy.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Short, but Looking forward to the new chapter

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Loved the story please tell me there will be a part 2

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Nice

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Would LOVE to read the rest of the story

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Great start! Love the size difference. Excited for more!

NevillLongBOTTOMNevillLongBOTTOM3 months agoAuthor

Definitely just the start, three parts planned as of now (forgot to add Part 1 to the title, but didn’t want to take it down). Thanks for all the support!

brazilianslavebrazilianslave3 months ago

Yum !! Love the start of this..... love your writing too...

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Good start, hope to read more soon.

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

Oh man! This is such an interesting story, funny entertaining and erotic. I wish I was Matt & I'm glad I'm not. I couldn't take that much attention and I'd be afraid she break me in half. But it wouldn't be something I could turn down. Sex with her would be incredible.

Thanks

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Literature major who’s putting his degree to good use. Smut without all of those overrated visuals.