All Comments on 'The Fake Blind Girl'

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AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Interesting story. Amusing and decently written. There are a couple missing words as well as one untranslated paragraph

Alcie fiocu ocrada, especially for them en meocnderme odfato de starem endo uam "oir dumb" but she wanted to keep up the charade so she asked:

But overall still good. And great compared to some web novelist translations.

jscobjscob10 months ago

Definitely one of the best stories I've read in a while.

kenringkenring7 months ago

Fantastic work! The translation sometimes fails but the story shines through. I hope to see more from you soon!

You should see if you can get an editor to improve the translation. I'd be happy to make an attempt if you wanted.

DonPKDonPK28 days ago

Relly good story, i hope for another part

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