All Comments on 'The Fall Ch. 06'

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Anonymousover 6 years ago

WTF?

WTF? That’s it?

ender2k2k over 6 years ago

It better be someone else has his phone.

Or this story just jumped the shark. Up to that point it is five stars.

Anonymousover 6 years ago

Really ?

Wow

tygz over 6 years ago

What. The. Fuck.

Damn I'm so hooked on this.

CharlieB4 over 6 years ago

Ahhh at last the twist...

Or just a bump in the road. Loved the way you handled Cyril's final moments, bought a tear to the eye. 5 *

Anonymousover 6 years ago

Wow, you really put us, and this story, in the shitter.

Can't wait to see how you pull us all out. For what its worth, I'm pulling for you. You go girl.

I just can't decide if its Kyle, or Chelle. I think Kyle thinks he's a better fit for her, or at least he thinks she'll be a better fuck and drinking buddy for him than his new wife, so this may be his attempt to blow up their relationship.

Write on.

johntcooksey about 6 years ago

What a shocking turn

Stunning. The only consolation is the knowledge that two chapters remain.Touche *****

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