by ausfet
Stunning. The only consolation is the knowledge that two chapters remain.Touche *****
Can't wait to see how you pull us all out. For what its worth, I'm pulling for you. You go girl.
I just can't decide if its Kyle, or Chelle. I think Kyle thinks he's a better fit for her, or at least he thinks she'll be a better fuck and drinking buddy for him than his new wife, so this may be his attempt to blow up their relationship.
Write on.
Or just a bump in the road. Loved the way you handled Cyril's final moments, bought a tear to the eye. 5 *
Or this story just jumped the shark. Up to that point it is five stars.