All Comments on 'The Fall Of Women Christmas Special'

You are an absolute master of this craft.

I loved the original story, and I can't believe that this one is so much better.

I was reading this story knowing that Sharpe would win, and I was sort of sad for Celeste. I knew that there was no way out for her, and I sighed, resigned to the knowledge that she'd lose... poor girl.

But then you brought in Lance... A perfect red herring, and I bought it entirely, like a fool.

I honestly thought that Lance would "save the day" (while still being terrible, but better than the alternative) and protect her from Sharpe.

But much like Lance himself, you ripped my heart apart and made me love it in the process. That was a relatively brief sex scene, but the accompanying betrayal made it one of the hottest things I've ever read.

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While reading, I was thinking about PMing you and asking if you'd mind if I wrote a story set in this world, (as you suggested in the first installment) but upon finishing the story, I don't feel worthy. lol

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The expanse between our skill-levels as authors is just too great. Maybe in a few years after my writing skill has improved more. Haha

I know that I've never written anything as hot as the final scene in this story. Fuck.

I'm not allowed to give you a dozen stars, so we'll have to settle for 5*

Damn. Great job.

Great stuff - looking forward to more from this world. Love how you do power exchange stories. Thanks for both your Xmas contributions!

Where's Prof Watkins?

Please continue this series