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All Comments on 'The Fallen: Prologue'

by EvilSmile

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LoquiSordidaAdMeLoquiSordidaAdMeabout 5 years ago
Trippy!

I have no idea where this is going, but it was wonderfully evocative. You painted an amazing picture of an overwhelming sensory experience. I look forward to seeing how you develop characters and build a plot around it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
No need to continue

This is a porn site. Not some esoteric high brow literature site. This is way too far out there for Literotica. Not to mention that it's a gore fest. Just awful.

Crusader235Crusader235about 5 years ago
Yech!

YECH F'in Gross! See ya in Hell I guess. 2 stars.

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To be left alone with ones own thoughts can be a beautifully dangerous thing. Much self-reflection can take place when battling with echoing noises bouncing off the walls of one's mind. Ongoing series: Defiled - Erotic horror Perverse rebirth - Erotic horror The Fallen - Erot...