All Comments on 'The Fallen Queen of Eden Ch. 08'

by Ohzee44

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Levi is one sick, deranged and demented perv. He is showing signs of being a cuckold as well. It's like watching Judge Frollo in Disney's The Hunchback of Notre Dame.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Nothing that advanced the story in this chapter. Needs to be more than a page, and bring something new that drives towards the end.

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