All Comments on 'The False House Ch. 04'

GODDAMMFLAMMIT I LOVE THIS CHAPTER!!!! The ending nearly had me scream in frustration, i swear, i almost bit my hand off!! This chapter was amaing, just what the story needed! Don't stop and please i want chapter 5 soon !!!!

Wait.. you didn't just end that chapter there. Jeez, the story is getting more awesome as it goes on and the author...you are more than amazing, your writing is superb.

I actually think you did the right thing there to leave it as you did. It gives us, the reader, the same feeling you've given poor Roman. I almost can't stand it, but will wait patiently (yeah, right!) for the next instalment. Brilliant writing, thank you!

You are the author leaves your readers wanting more and more. The story leaves you on the edge of your seat. You need to keep going with this story. There are many avenues to take with a story like this. Keep writing for you bring in the reader to the story each and every time. I can't stand that you let the story stop in the way you did, there needs to be a good comeback for the next chapter.

So it is really done? My god! Speechless! Now what? Well, if it is over, which it seems to be, FANTASTIC!

oh man, mean cliffhanger. That was very smooth of Roman! lol But, I'm glad he did it. But, is the relationship even possible without destroying one another, given their being addicts, esp. when one is trying to recover and the other is happy in his addiction? you left us with a real cliffie b/c the next expression or word could be anything. I can't wait to see what happens. In a way he took Jesse's advice that he gave him about his mom...he said something and at least he know now and then he can decide how to move forward....Just as Jesse said

please keep writing! I love how you have us waiting in the most intense point of the thing! this is a very good plot, you a great writer, and I am addicted to your work.

"I could kick a kitten and all her kitten friends off a building right now I'm so mad." I laughed so hard at this line I accidentally inhaled my pony tail and choked on it. This story is so fuckin good

compliments to you, i too agree about the kitten line,so you've def got two readers hooked. i hoping for the best for these two, they've got challenges ahead, more than them being happy in love i want them to be strong, secure, sober and well. give me my HEA