All Comments on 'The Family'

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rubberpony37rubberpony37about 2 years ago

A wonderful story. Perhaps go slower and provide more depth into the takeover of the family. Looking forward to more !

karli1234karli1234about 2 years ago

very interesting way of story telling, enjoyed. Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Great story. It deserves to be written in a much longer and more detailed version.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Racist crap

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

If only white men were really so timid we would never have been enslaved for 300 years, where were these dickkess men then and why didn’t all these bad ass black boys take things over sooner. Crazy.

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I am a chuck writer so move on if you don't like chuck stories. Keep your shit to yourself.