All Comments on 'The Family Mansion Rewrite Pt. 04'

Love the series, please upload the next part. I’m dying to read it!!!

Sorry I think it written very well but I think the original is soooo better I know the grammar and some are mistakes but to me the STORY is much better the rewrite

know this story is really done in the writing aspect but the original was much better on would love finish it following you have story going

I also would not this story to gone so review may be about the story compared to each other

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I have never given that to any one else but like you story's not trying to be creepy sorry if you take that way

I'm loving the series as it deals with fantasies of mine.

Poor Momma surrounded by sex, but to take advantage of a poor 'sleeping' boy, tsk, tsk. Another well thought out and written chapter. I look forward to reading the next. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination (memories?) and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.