All Comments on 'The Family Mansion Rewrite Pt. 08'

I keep loving what you are posting. The fiction you write pushes the right buttons to make it work for me. The topics you write about are exactly what I look for in erotic fiction. You are right now the author whose fiction I like the most. I'd like you not to get discouraged because of some bad critics. Those critic readers already have lots and lots of authors that write the erotic fiction they seem to like, but right now I cannot find any other author who writes the erotic fiction I'm looking for and that it's almost exactly what you are writing.

Good story but way too slow paced.

This is a great story. Your characters are coming across as very real. Saying that, I feel for Nate. Looking forward to more chapters coming up.

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