All Comments on 'The Family Mansion Rewrite Pt. 15'

I basically never comment on literotica, but I felt compelled to here.

I enjoy your stories, but with each and every one I feel like I'm reading the script of a will-they-won't-they romance anime where the main character is constantly cockblocked by random shit until the very last episode where the lead character kiss once and then the credits roll.

Essentially my comment boils down to: stop cockblocking me by playing these games, it's in almost every single story you write. If your stories sucked I wouldn't be here, I genuinely enjoy your stories and would like them to improve. But I'm not 13, the readers on literotica aren't 13, these teen anime romance games are stale and unsatisfying. Fix it or I'm out.

The story was good but a little TOO much on Nate. Also in one paragraph you wrote that Liz and Nate hit a truck and died, WTF?