All Comments on 'The Family Mansion Rewrite Pt. 20'

Thanks for another great installment. I liked it.

Yeeeeeessssss new Chapter!!!!!

Yeeeeessssss

Ok.... gracias por el nuevo capítulo, tardo algo fue tiempo pero pr fin salió

Translation from anonymous:

Ok... Thanks for the new chapter, it took some time to be released but, in the end it was.

More Caps plisssssss

more more more please I really want to see what a new side of the story looks like

I love all your stories and will read everything you write, so please keep going! I saw another comment that someone wants both this rewrite and the original Family Mansion storylines to keep going and I very enthusiastically agree!!

So, now both versions are more or less at the same spot... I liked the first story premise better. The "father" leaving everyone behind cut down on the tension of everyone getting caught.

New Chapters .... plisss...

Más...... por favor....

Plisssssssss more Chapters

This story definitley needs to go on!

I want more chapters!!!!!

If you are intending to keep writing this please let us know!