All Comments on 'The Family Pt. 01'

real good keep it going and i bit there is more than 5,000 dollars in that envelope

Nice start. Looking forward to the next chapter(s).

Oh sweetie, how I love the start of this story. I do hope you plan on continuing to add to it!

Wow!!! Fabulous!!!

That was fucking awesome! Definitely looking forward to part 2 and beyond!

Oh, that was wonderful. I can't wait for more!

Loved it when is pt 2 coming out

Wow! What a great story. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. I can't wait. You have a great writing style.

That was amazing

Loving the story so far, looking forward to future chapters

Way to set up the next installment. Looking forward to it soonest!

Oh honey that was amazing! I so look forward to the next release. Excellent writing and wonderful detail. Waiting to come back for more…

Looking forward to next installment

Next chapter soon as you can, love this story line...Hugs and Kisses Betty jo xoxo

Thanks for all the wonderful feedback! I have already started on part 2, but it may take some time. I will be diving into Maddie's feminization (of course), some more interactions with Marilyn and we'll also learn just a little bit more about Chloe and this "organization." I can't wait for all of you to read it!

Loved the 1st part, hope u keep it going!!

Loved it please give us more.

Amazing thanks so much

Great story.

Looking forward to its continuation.

Big thumbs up.

I wish The Family was a real thing and existed when I was younger and in much better shape

Thank you for a delightful read!:)

loved it need more soon

This is so good !!!!! can't wait for the next chapter

great story, hoping it continues!

Please can we have a folliw up to this story soon Dani xx

Would love to see have this continued

well that left me wanting more. best story line ever great job

Great storyline that I hope runs into several chapters. Is it not time to release Chapter 2 ???

Please don’t keep me and your many ardent fans waiting much longer …… 🤞

I wish that I could meet Chloe. I just began my transition MtF at 62. Make things easier? Certainly more fun. 🏳️‍⚧️💋