All Comments on 'The Family Room Ch. 05'

by Mused

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

This got to be really stupid!!!

ScottishTexanScottishTexanover 2 years ago

"No, no ink," I said brushing her smooth tummy, "not on my baby sister."

Best decision Rick has made during this entire story.

PrinceLukePrinceLukeover 4 years ago
I got a feeling...

Lance is going to make Sam fuck his sister while his drunk. Loved this cant wait for the next. On i go

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Uh-oh; the plot thickens

DKP

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Love it

Wish i had a best friend like Lance that would help me out in tough times

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Blackmail

I hope that lance is able to blackmail Erin by making her brother fuck her and then she can't say anything to anyone one about Rick and Julie.

zfammezfammeover 16 years ago
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i thought this was incest/romance/drama? because i am on the edge of my seat...feels like suspense to me. great chapter! *runs off to the next ch.* :D

PEATBOGPEATBOGover 18 years ago
Another interesting chapter!

This tale of sister/bother love continues and, thankfully, you're not going to let the story end here. As predicted, Erin is the only 'bad apple in the barrel' and now needs to be dealt with decisively!

Mr Wild willyMr Wild willyover 18 years ago
Excellence!

Excellence is created by the rich characters, the well told story line, the romance, yes even the sex is well done. This is GREAT stuff. I anxiously await the continuation.

stevaroonistevarooniover 18 years ago
Heh. Telegraphing, Mused?

I love it. You have a great storytelling style that surpasses the subject. Descriptions, suspense, it's all great. And, need I say it, "More!"?

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Very curious...

I've loved these chapters, I hope the next one comes quickly, you certainly have left us in suspense about Lance.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
An unexpected twist...

to this story; I'm so glad you decided to continue it!

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