by Mused
to this story; I'm so glad you decided to continue it!
I've loved these chapters, I hope the next one comes quickly, you certainly have left us in suspense about Lance.
I love it. You have a great storytelling style that surpasses the subject. Descriptions, suspense, it's all great. And, need I say it, "More!"?
Excellence is created by the rich characters, the well told story line, the romance, yes even the sex is well done. This is GREAT stuff. I anxiously await the continuation.
This tale of sister/bother love continues and, thankfully, you're not going to let the story end here. As predicted, Erin is the only 'bad apple in the barrel' and now needs to be dealt with decisively!
i thought this was incest/romance/drama? because i am on the edge of my seat...feels like suspense to me. great chapter! *runs off to the next ch.* :D
I hope that lance is able to blackmail Erin by making her brother fuck her and then she can't say anything to anyone one about Rick and Julie.
Wish i had a best friend like Lance that would help me out in tough times
Lance is going to make Sam fuck his sister while his drunk. Loved this cant wait for the next. On i go
"No, no ink," I said brushing her smooth tummy, "not on my baby sister."
Best decision Rick has made during this entire story.