by JupiterMars
Two things my ex-girlfriend really enjoyed: sex, and Star Trek (original series only). I once sent her a photo of a guy in a red shirt with "Expendable" written on it, which she liked. I enjoyed "He's Dead Gym" and the "Fan Trap" title. Thanks!
I started out thinking this was a current-day story and then when they went to the convention it was clear this took place in the past but reading further it seemed to be present day again. This felt weird and distracted from an otherwise good story.
Not a trekker but the story was excellent. Common interests often cut through perceived boundaries. Wilfredo is sneaky but he was right this time . Well done!
And wonderful. The nod to Quinto was a nice touch as well. All the stars!
Except for Noelle using Birth Control, now you know how Star Trek reproduce. See even Trek fans get laid!!!!!!!
I love Star Trek so this was right up my alley. Really liked the addition of Leonard Nimoy.
One of the best written stories on this site. I stayed intrigued and watched the movie in my mind as I read. I have read this three times at least. Always wanting a continuation, sadly it has never happened. You are more talented than you know.