All Comments on 'The Fan Trap'

by JupiterMars

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Great Star Trek jokes!

Two things my ex-girlfriend really enjoyed: sex, and Star Trek (original series only). I once sent her a photo of a guy in a red shirt with "Expendable" written on it, which she liked. I enjoyed "He's Dead Gym" and the "Fan Trap" title. Thanks!

FeonorxFeonorxalmost 4 years ago
When did this take place?

I started out thinking this was a current-day story and then when they went to the convention it was clear this took place in the past but reading further it seemed to be present day again. This felt weird and distracted from an otherwise good story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Fine realistic story

Not a trekker but the story was excellent. Common interests often cut through perceived boundaries. Wilfredo is sneaky but he was right this time . Well done!

EroticLitKittyEroticLitKittyalmost 4 years ago
Felt so real

And wonderful. The nod to Quinto was a nice touch as well. All the stars!

swear_toobobswear_toobobalmost 4 years ago
Loved it

Super cute and engaging, only wish it was a few chapters!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
So sweet

Ah young nerd lovers. Nicely done.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Trek Sex...............

Except for Noelle using Birth Control, now you know how Star Trek reproduce. See even Trek fans get laid!!!!!!!

chaniseaustinchaniseaustinover 3 years ago
Fan of this story!

I love Star Trek so this was right up my alley. Really liked the addition of Leonard Nimoy.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Yeah wilfredo

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

One of the best written stories on this site. I stayed intrigued and watched the movie in my mind as I read. I have read this three times at least. Always wanting a continuation, sadly it has never happened. You are more talented than you know.

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