All Comments on 'The Farm Ch. 02'

You say he's abducted in the description. Why does he say 'this is what he'll know'? How will he be convinced of this? This poor boy. Why does he want him broken? What fun would that be? I Hope he will not abuse him...hoping the fact he tried to seem like the good guy will mean he wants the kid to feel safe or something. But he seems too awful to do anything but abuse.

I think you write very well; again, your use of description and the creation of atmosphere is so good. But I agree with Anonymous' comments. Also, on a personal note, I don't get BDSM at all, it just always seems a pretty cruel way for folk to get their rocks off. And I was intrigued about the 'Prize' (please dignify him with a name!) in terms of his history and his character; same with Gordy. I want to see some humanity in Gordy, and some kindness for the black haired boy. BDSM just makes them impersonal and I cannot enjoy someone being in distress. But then, maybe I'm just an old fashioned softie who writes about French guys and Spanish captains!! I will look forward to Chapter 3.

This is hot and heart breaking. Can't wait for what's to come.

First impression is that he feel too evil. Smiling when he give the young man false hope. I enjoy some bmsd, but is more about trust and loose control of push your boundaries. This feels more like rape.