by VenusButterflies
Please wrap up the story with Liam and Viv finally running away together so that she becomes his slut only. It's apparent that's what they both want.
Even though this story is over seven years old, I feel there should have been a couple more chapters for Closure. It was actually pretty sad that there was light at the end of the road for this story, like some way to Escape this hell of being raped over and over again! But with no Chance of possible escape would give these sex prisoner nothing to live for, even with the brainwashing they were using. Plus what ever happened to her family, friends or John looking for her??
Please, please continue?? This story is so well written and dynamic and actually fulfills the desires of a more taboo kink.... It's a story that deserves to be told, and your writing is desired.
I see people asked for more of this story years ago! I’m dying for a conclusion!!
This is one of the best stories I have read here and there needs to be a continuation. It’s novel material.
real bad if this series got abandoned!! :(;)
Love this series!!!!so good! So bad...but in the good way...havnt been this hooked to a fantastic read in a while!!!!hope youll write more on this series!!!!😃
Really being punished for having a miscarriage. This is well written but sometimes you should ask if some thoughts should be shared with the world and this story is one that is too messed up to be shared in my opinion.
Love it, can wait for more
And if you don't mind me saying... I get that this is a non con piece of erotica and I actually have yet to read anything other than typical wham bam thank you ma'am on this site but the blossoming controversial bond between Viv and Liam is in a twisted way kind of sweet and I'm a sucker for romance and HEA's so I'm hoping that that's the direction you'll be developing the story in.regardless I can't wait to see what you do next 😁
AB
More please? Do they run off togther? Why set up the dom in the first chapter if he isnt going to come around again?
When will you submit the next chapter? It's been 7 months since this one and I can't wait to read the next one. Will you be bringing John back into the mix, possibly to buy Vivienne? Or will Viv and Liam end up married to love, fuck, suck and whore ever after? So many possibilities, but only you, the author, knows... bwahahahaha!
When is the next chapter coming in? I love this story and it's characters!!
I truly am holding my breath to read the next chapter! I hope it's not too far away!
Thank you kindly! I have been spread a little thin as of late, but am going to resume working on the next chapter. Shouldn't be too long . . .
I love love love this series. Please keep it up... I love her reluctance to submit, and lord I just love Liam.
I beg of you to get us the next chapter!!
Thank you so much :) Now if I can keep it up for the next chapter . . .
This is your best chapter yet. The conversation in the middle, about Liam's past, then where the narrator turns introspective, really adds a great deal of depth. Excellent choice and job there.
Then, of course, there is all of the hot, filthy, well-described sex, which was stirring, as always.
Thank you so much! I'm so glad you liked this chapter, and that you're enjoying the story. :)
I loved this chapter it was SO good. I enjoyed how Liam got his revenge and she got to learn more about him. I love that she is still putting up a fight in her mind and the little Vivienne/Liam moments. This was a great, longer chapter. Cannot wait for more and to see what Liam has to say and how he will handle someone else having her. Keep it going!