All Comments on 'The Fascination of Ashley Ch. 02'

by Jiggajank

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PickeringPickeringabout 7 years ago
Very nice!

Looking forward to the next episode.

You write dialogue very well.

Admiralbird348Admiralbird348about 7 years ago

Great story! Very well written:))

Keep going:)

Thanks for writing it:))

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Very hot... please continue!

I hope you continue with this and build up to an orgy with Ashley, her mom, and her cousin!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
BAM

Hoping the two cousins get freaky with each other as they're taking those big, black poles jammed in their cunts.

D7600D7600almost 7 years ago
Great story

Better than Diane and really starting to be a hot story, keep going, would love to read more

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago

Yea I hope next time Darius gets to double tap both those big black cock worshiping white chicks

nfwaynfwayalmost 7 years ago

I really like that you're developing this somewhat like a romance. There are so many interracial stories just about conquest and dominance and moving on to the next available pussy or dick. Maybe I'm just being sappy, but the couples in your story (so far) seem to be aware of a deeper connection to each other while still exploring the sexual one. I like it. A lot. Thanks.

P. S. I hope you don't go the route some commenters are encouraging of having all of your characters banging each other. Good work.

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