All Comments on 'The Feminist Secretary'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Wow...

...very sad...could have been far better, both the plot and the writing. E1GLHf

petmyheadpetmyheadover 4 years ago
Great job!

I thought it was a very hot read. Very passionate writing, and a fun, over the top tone.

Lainie666Lainie666over 4 years ago
Needs some improvement

Overused the term "Asian." Do some proofreading.

Also, you used the word "rustic" twice and I don't think you understand what that word means. Did you mean "rusty?" A squeak cannot be "rustic."

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
🌟🌟🌟🌟+ [4+ (4.4/5=88%)]. This story has got quite a few favorites: 29 faves ot of 30,704 views which is 0.94 faves per 1K views.

😊

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Quite difficult to read with all the typos and poor grammar

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