by flashgordon562006
Seems that young affluent attractive people have no jealousy or moral borders. Fucking your wife's lesbian lover might be plausible, but just nonchalantly inviting your Horsecock bestie over to spunk inside your spouse just makes me wonder how this guy could be so clueless yet has an upscale four bedroom mcmansion with a pool and Jacuzzi. Guess working paycheck to paycheck means I'll have nothing better than Literotica and spankbang..........oh well💑
Having some guy fuck his wife, w the requisite "big cock" you kind lost me there. Could have ended it at the threesome. Oh well ...
I'm still trying to figure out The Fence as the title of the story; I think "The Security System" would be a more appropriate title. Nonetheless, I liked the plot and the fucking. I thought Tony and Cindy would have been invited as permanent house guests. Fun story.
It started as a good read, fairly easy to imagine and believe, until Tony got added...then it became a little too happy, happy, joy, joy to stay realistic
This is a FANTASTIC collection of single sentence writing...the GREATEST collection I've seen in some time. The lack of developed thought is ASTOUNDING.
Having "caught" the two women together and coming on like a belligerent is garbage. The wife already knows something's up. There's no need for false pretenses. And to claim OWNERSHIP of the situation is just baby green puke.
So, yeah, the story is very lame.
...as soon as you wanted to butt in on things between Cindy and Debbie. Instead of thinking of yourself you should have left them well enough alone.
1) Why use the "big cock" element as it sets up hubby for humiliation and wife cheat?
2) Why have both hubby and wife jump into 3d and 4th lovers with no background on whether they have done this before, or at least discussed it?