All Comments on 'The Fertility Plague'

by PreggoClaireBrooks42

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rdbag87rdbag876 months ago

I hope you revisit this idea later and flesh it out a bit.

PreggoClaireBrooks42PreggoClaireBrooks426 months agoAuthor

I might do so if my brain comes up with more! I kinda rushed it because I didn't want to risk stopping and putting the idea on the back burner forever! Thank you!

bladebowbladebow6 months ago

the different paths this story could take are too many to mention. if you call this "tossed together" then you are an even greater genius than you realize. this even opens the path to dollcett style stories. not to mention whats its like to grow up as one of the virous babies and what abilities they might manifest as they mature. please keep this virous story alive.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

This story's universe has the potential to create an interesting series of stories. I'd like to see more in the future.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

This is an excellent setting. Looking forward to read more :)

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

So very creative!! Thank you and please keep writing.

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