All Comments on 'The Festival Ch. 01'

This is a tried-and-tested plot, but well handled and I look forward to Ch.02. One thing: I'm a little surprised Ste looked to Nick before fucking Amy, given he'd already ridden her in the bedroom (unless he just went down on her, of course).

Plausibility went out the window when the author has to strip down to his shorts. Anyone who does this in a typical British flat will almost certainly suffer hypothermia and end up in the ER!!!