All Comments on 'The Festival Ch. 03'

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Frankie1952Frankie1952over 2 years ago

I love how they are falling for each other and Steve is filling Leahs pussy with cum. I can only hope they get to be together if they dont get caught at home. I think Leah needs to dump Marco and go move in with Steve so they can make babies.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Enjoying the story. Can’t wait to see where it goes next. Seems like it would be hard to wrap up in only one more chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Enjoying the story. The only thing I don't like is her still having a boyfriend. She needs to dump Marco!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I just imagined in the next Chapter Leah yelling out "Steve" as she fucks Marco & stuff hits the fan. dumb idea but that's what I thought. Anyway I gave the chapter a 5. It was maybe a little short but fun to read.

Want2CUMMWant2CUMMover 2 years ago

This is a very hot story. You write about brother and sister loving very well -- as if you've experienced it! I hope you continue to pursue your story endeavors in this genre as you are very good!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Hopefully a New Year’s Eve party orgy is in the works. Some lesbian action and then these two fuck in front of their friends.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Brilliant story and thoroughly enjoying the series soo far. Was thinking maybe Leah and her brother could start experimenting with certain fetishes such as pissing or golden showers. Maybe a nude wedding is in the works with him cumming on her face to symbolise her commitment to him. Hope the series continues in any form.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Are you gonna post the next chapter soon?

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I was hoping the next chapter with the New Year’s Eve party would have released yesterday or today. Really wanting it to have some group sex amongst the original four

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Can you please write the final chapter to this series? Ideally they end up having an orgy with their friends at the party and eventually the two siblings fuck in front of their friends.

JohnnyStudJohnnyStudalmost 2 years agoAuthor

Thanks for the feedback everyone. The last chapter is about 2/3 done. Apologies for the delay.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Things I would love to see in the next chapter if it is indeed the party they were talking about.

-some game between the group that gets more and more sexual as it progresses

-Leah and naomi kiss and oral at some point

-Leah watches Steve and naomi have sex in front of everyone, feels jealous

-Steve watches Leah and Harry have sex in front of everyone, feels jealous too

-some threeway action perhaps?

-ultimate Steve and Leah fuck in front of their friends

-lots of different positions

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

In response to the previous comment:

Imagine at some point during the game Leah is getting spit roasted by Harry and Marco while Steve is fucking Naomi. Everyone finished except Leah and Steve who proceed to give into their urges and start fucking in front of everyone. They even let on that this isn’t their first time. Now that would be hot.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Next chapter when?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Are you almost done? Can we get the next part soon? It's been a really long time

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

My man can we get an update??

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

C’mon man it’s been soooo long please let us know if the next part is close to being released

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I would also love to see some girl/girl and group sex games

JohnnyStudJohnnyStudover 1 year agoAuthor

Chapter 4 is nearly ready. Sorry for the wait and thank you for the lovely messages. If you send feedback to me personally, don't forget to include your email so that I can reply :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I hope nearly ready means in the next day or so. I also hope it’s worth the wait

DevonadrianDevonadrianover 1 year ago

Great to see you're back. On to chpt 4

KlitomaticKlitomaticabout 1 year ago

The chances they take. But, then I know all about that.

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