All Comments on 'The Fifty-Cal Gal Ch. 02'

always happy to see more futa on male

Another great chapter. But please make the next one longer. Don't sacrifice quality for a small word count.

I loved this! Why not do some more where its their life? Or like maybe include some of the other females? Some live teasing and stuff.

I’ve just read both chapters and it’s a nice tale simply told. I see chapter two was only two days behind chapter one. It’s a pity you didn’t submit as one story. Three Lit pages, give or take, is the ideal for this type of story and, generally speaking, one pagers aren’t well received particularly those less than 2.5k.

I only occasionally delve into this category and am very picky about what I read.

Just loved it - very gifted and hot.

xoxo

Di

'Nutter good'un