All Comments on 'The Fighter Ch. 04'

Wow. Such a sweet chapter! Im pulling for them both!

They are so well-matched, and I love the slow build in their relationship.

I like the pace considering the relationship is a LD one. I like that you skip over the times they are separated. Is the scar just a line? I was assuming he'd carve a word or something to brand him with something that pointed out his being gay. What a dick that Mick was! I feel badly for Wesley. He's had a lot happen and I hope Christian can be strong enough to help him, which will be hard if he continues to have to hide who he is.

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Waited so long for such a short chapter...

I like the slow building up pace for this story. They're both not out so its the perfect pace for their situations. Please continue I would like to know more about Westley's scar. His supposed best friend branded him so I'm guessing he craved a word on him. I also want to know what happened to him like did he get jail time.

I was very excited to see that you have been able to continue your writting. Love the story, love the struggles and connection the characters feel. I would imagine it is about time for things to get ratched up a notch or two but time will tell. Just try not to let so much time pass.

It is great that Westley opened up to Christian and can't wait to see how this progresses