All Comments on 'The Final Episode'

by Bebop3

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Boyd PercyBoyd Percyover 1 year ago

I bet Chris pooped in his pants when he heard that!

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amygdalaamygdalaover 1 year ago

I can’t help but remember the Boondocks parody with Chris Hansen and the booty warrior when reading this 🤪 We can do this the easy way or the hard way!!!! 🤣🤣🤣🤣

jmmj5jmmj5over 1 year ago

Nicely done.

Great twist. Didn't see that coming.

Glad to see you posting again. Thanks.

dwoelfledwoelfleover 1 year ago

Fun quick hit story. Very good.

NoTalentHackNoTalentHackover 1 year ago

“Hey now, big guy. This looks like a win-win to me. We can guarantee you a meal every week for a year. Just have your Renfield take a look at the contracts and…”

TechumsahTechumsahover 1 year ago

Did not see that twist.

oldsage_1oldsage_1over 1 year ago

Not sure Rod Serling would approve but well done! I sure didn't see that ending coming! Thanks for the quicky!

Cheers

SAGE

Boyd PercyBoyd Percyover 1 year ago

That bites, doesn't it!

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amadthonamadthonover 1 year ago

Holy plot twist, Batman! Awesome!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Talk about pulling a rabbit out of your ass.

If Chris had been Italian, old Nossy would have been ass fucked.

Nossy types don't like garlic.

EastCoaster1EastCoaster1over 1 year ago

Nice twist on what looked like a very formulaic setup !

"5" for the creativity !

ThatNewGuyThatNewGuyabout 1 year ago

What a delightful twist! I like how you planted the seed in the second sentence with "an Eastern European businessman with a vague background..." Did not see that one coming.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Trash

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Awesome!!!

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