All Comments on 'The Final Insult Ch. 01'

by KemMyst

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Iread2relaxIread2relaxalmost 9 years ago
The Final Insult

The title makes me apprehensive. Love the story though. Thanks for sharing.

baikalisanbaikalisanalmost 9 years ago
Sketchy

Sketchy sketchy! But giving it a chance and waiting to read more

katgoddess1katgoddess1almost 9 years ago

Is part of this missing?

Wolftight21Wolftight21almost 9 years ago
Interesting.

Interesting.

Dani1212Dani1212almost 9 years ago
No!!!

How could you have Devon after all he and Anne went through? Why wasn't Duncan good enough to have a mate and children? This story is to heart breaking to read after your first story!

Dani1212Dani1212almost 9 years ago
THIS IS JUST WRONG!

They are supposed to have centuries together! Not twenty years! More time should have past between stories. Or you should have used different characters in this story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Just no

One if the biggest pet peeves I have is main character death. Is just so irritating.

ladiebrowneyezladiebrowneyezalmost 9 years ago
LOL

the comments made me stop reading if they think its horrible then i cant continue even though i skipped through most of it lol

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