All Comments on 'The Fire In His Eyes'

by AmandaLynn

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Good job!!

I liked your storie. It was well written and very discriptive. It made my cock hard. Well done.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Outstanding...

Keep up the great work !!!!!

AmandaLynnAmandaLynnalmost 12 years agoAuthor
Thanks!

Thanks for the comments!! This is my very first short story and Im actually super glad it got approved for the site! Keep the feedback coming! :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

Not romance, should have been erotic couplings.

AmandaLynnAmandaLynnalmost 12 years agoAuthor
Ok.

Im new around here and not familiar with categories. Forgive me.

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