All Comments on 'The Fire Red Arrows'

Very nicely done. I liked it a lot.

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Good job. As satire it wasn't too broad, and as mind control stories go it was quite benign. (Sometimes they amount to rape.)

thanks.

Not sure if I'd really call it satire… it was definitely cute, and one of the better stories I've seen that involve Cupid's arrows!

... a fun read.

Cupid flipping the bird was a nice touch. I laughed out loud.

Awww this is so sweet! And quite hot too! Thank you!

You had me at the caveats. Spelling errors indeed, haha. Very cute story.