All Comments on 'The Firefighter's Ball'

Only one word to describe reading this story...TEDIOUS

lol it was definately weird but it kept my attention there should definately be a second part .... fdind out what happens to the nutcase. good job

you should write a series about the mis-adventures of Norbert Puffer.

Very funny as well as vry erotic. Would make a great movie.

funny and sexy...more power

Put Norbert and Mr. Pemberton together and you have a series!!!

Almost like the Perils of Pauline!

Funny things happen at this firefight's ball, we only hear the name of norbert and puffer, we never hear the name of She mentioned one time in this chapter.

loved the satire.