All Comments on 'The First Aid Lesson'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
first aid lesson

first aid is the best aid..physician heal thyself!!!

Now, I really don't care about guys, but in this case thre should be some indications of your own reactions...the typical bulging wood that draws attention from Mary, did she accidently brush you as she positioned you? and the sly grins of the biddies? Maybe even something from Sarah?

this needs much more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

I was waiting for the erotic part to begin. Then the story finished. At least it was short. Two stars.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Innocent pantie watching

Reminds me when I was standing under a railway bridge and looked up as a lady walked down the steps. I was treated to a lovely view of her white knickers.

DusterDDusterDover 4 years ago
Wow

I enjoy your short stories very much and wish that they led to happy ending

Either self manual relief or maybe with some help

DustbinhogDustbinhogalmost 3 years ago

Fabulous short story. The view up her dress must have been so erotic. Not all stories need actual sex to be an enjoyable read.

NylonlustNylonlustalmost 2 years ago

Great story, this would be one of my frav sexual fantasies, seeing right up her skirt to her suspenders and làcy white knickers. Feeling very aroused just reading it only wish I was there.

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