All Comments on 'The First Break-in'

Look forward to more please!

Hot story

Looking forward to what he does to the couple and their daughter! Lots of possibilities there!

I hope you'll write about ALL of Daniel's earlier robberies. Great first story!

Really good story. Much prefer the victim to have fun too, despite herself. Only negative was that he trashed the house - if he’s trying to be a professional burglar and rapist, he should just do what is necessary, and trashing is pathetic and beneath him.

The plot and most of the content of this story was excellent. For me, the story dragged a little in some places because of too much detail (like the cutting of the bed sheets) and the paragraphs were sometimes too long to read easily. (After 6-7 lines in a digital paragraph, it becomes more difficult to make transitions between lines and keep your place). I would have enjoyed hearing a bit more about the torture beyond the first fuck, especially of the first anal.

I would spell pantie as panty and put pantyhose together (that's how it is on the product packaging, at least.

So hot and exciting! Great work

Loved this. Loved that she was gagged the whole time. I honestly hate dialog and it’s just hotter that way lol

Good story! Hope to see more from this author.

Definitely like this one way more then the 2nd part. This didn’t have any unnecessary dialog and, personally, the incest thing is not my cup of tea. But this was fantastic !