All Comments on 'The First Date'

by NotHemingway

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Well written but I’d prefer the alternate version of a first date with Mdom and Fsub.

Thanks for sharing

Tess (uk)

Submisky35Submisky35almost 2 years ago

Short and sweet. Nice story. This version was just fine. I'm hoping that we'll be treated to a second date.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I like this version very much, go girl!

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I write for a living, although not fiction. I enjoy stories where the eroticism flows from the narrative, and the specifics are left to one's imagination. I am often accused of being short on descriptions of sex acts, but I'm trying to do better in that regard. All comments...