All Comments on 'The First Evil Ch. 03'

totally hooked now! looking forward to more chapters and hopefully a completed story.

I'm really glad for the quick updating. This was perfect, the little but important details after her change ,others don't bother to write, were amazing and briliantly written.

Love that you have avoided so many sterotypes making this story one of a kind.

And I've just got to say this, I'm so glad about the biker.

I like how oblique it is. It requires more thought and attention from the reader, as well as keeping us wanting more details. I do hope the man survives. Too often no good deed goes unpunished.

This has to be one of the best stories that I've read on this site. Visceral, some stories manage, but they usually don't manage to keep you guessing, nor do they manage to provoke emotions the way yours is.