All Comments on 'The First Step'

Another great story by Jenn, This is a well written extremly arousing story! I hope it continues?

Great job!

a really good story. Hope you write sequella to this one.

I enjoy most of your stories. I personaly enjoy mature, small group, and loving wives stories. I gues all because they are fantasies of mine where as bdsm, gay, anal,and gang bangs are of no perssonal interest.

I think if it were me I would like to write about their frist try with another man. Then maybe a woman giving husband and wife a threeway. How about it baby!?

This story moved fast and had elements of reality. Both partners made the fantasy come to life. The story ended as a fantasy, with a promice of more to follow. I will want to watch for this writers next submission.

Hey nice story,you have an open mind, marry me????

Somewhat well written, but she uses her sex to get answers from him that he would not normally give and that is too bad. He has a fantasy about his wife and other men and a fantasy such as this should be kept between the two of them in the bedroom. If it becomes a realty, someone will get hurt and neither of them want to be hurt.

Well written, but where do they find all the writers who enjoy writing about perverts. I gave up after he got hard watching some guy hit on his wife. Sad story. the Ct. Yankee

If there was ever a way for a sexually gutsy woman to broach the subject to a nervous but enthusiastic husband, this is it. Well done. Very real dialogue, nice tension building in the sex scene and a good teaser for what future installments may show.

Looking forward to the sequel.

Jen keep them coming - this was absolutely on the money and had me rock hard in seconds once she started asking the questions. There is no doubt that sex disturbs rationality, and once it is on the brain you will (I will at least) do just about anything. I am sure I would respond that way too.

Outside sex who knows, but in sex fantasy takes over.

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Very well done... The right amount of detail, as well as conflict and tension. Please keep up the good work!

As an experienced nudist, I don't think you "dress for dinner" at a nudist camp.

my wife and I enjoyed it very much.

We loved it. Please continue!

Nicely written, well structured, does a good job of drawing the reader in. There's only one problem - we need more chapters.

I liked this. Well structured with a good pace,. You had me always wanting to read more.

Just wish there was more!

This story is so hot I didn't want it to end. Please continue.

Open communication between partners can be a wonderful thing.

I loved your story and can tell this is more than just a story. I will read more and hope to see more insight to your mind. Play hard, you say. That will be easy after reading this.

I was just thinking if people like this real exist For arguments sank let's say they do can just imagine what pigs the woman be ! Just Food For thought.

Excellent start to a series. The interplay of shared fantasies is riveting. As Beth gets more comfortable with expressing her own desires, her husband begins to realize his own loss of control. Can't wait to read the next segments.

Well written. I enjoyed the way you build to the climax (no pun intended). The wife beginning to assert her dominance. I hope I can anticipate several more installments. I expect her to fulfill the fantasy. I hope you take this further in the direction. Wife pushing limits, finding dominant men, husband increasingly submissive and humiliated. He is made to serve her orally only - and later on her girlfriends orally at their whim. She and her lover (and her girlfriends) humiliate and subordinate him sexually.

Very hot. momma sounds like she wares the pants but wants other men to take them off.

Does any know why he was banned ?. Cool story

A mfm is nothing more than a cuck and whore's story.