All Comments on 'The First Swim of Summer'

A pleasant and fun story overall. I wouldn't call it highly erotic, but it was definitely worth a read. I found the long, detailed passages of excessive drinking and "partying" tedious, and they didn't raise my opinion of any of the characters. Everyone just seemed terribly shallow: cliche' college students. I did like that there was some character development near the end. The business about the mini-fire was handled deftly (by the writer).

A wild but believable college party story. Solid work.