All Comments on 'The First Threesome'

Good story

Welcome aboard. It's always a pleasure to welcome a new contributor. You do proof read your text, clear from the absence of typos. But, a fresh read would still be potentially useful to spot things like how Stuart left in the next to last paragraph and how in the final para. he was still asleep in the next bed. Keep 'em coming.

I guess it should be a good marriage.

She gets to fuck lots of guys, he gets to support her.

Wife watch? That's what the tag said. Must be the new polite way to say cuckold. Kind of like lies are no longer lies, they're grammatical inexactitudes. What a wasted first story.

Well, those certainly are all words, but a shockingly high number of them aren't being used correctly.

Nice tail though. ;)

Boyfriend and Stuart get to switch places. Boyfriend watches and blows on her face while Stuart cums in her pussy.

Great first story. As a female I know how exciting it can be to have people watch as I have sex with my husband.

WOW!!! Definitely five stars.

Sometimes the quietest innocent looking women could be a smoking volcano just under the surface giving the right circumstances.

I would love to get my girlfriend into this position also. Maybe this Halloween when she's going to dress like a sexy school girl with no panties and a short pleated skirt will be in Las Vegas so anything can happen.

Looking forward to part two of the story.

Typo in second paragraph! Heroine, not heroin.

3

Long boring 😴 story 👎👎👎

Great story, but it needs more editing.

I'll give you a 5 for this first story. Future stories will need to have those grammar edits and somewhat more consistent sentences to make it flow a little better.

Funny good story and lots of guys I know that had roommates in NYC because of crazy high rents were lucky enough to participate in scenes like this . One roomed with two guys and they would often party and on occasion dp the others girl especially when it wasn’t a real serious relationship. Just so happens the other guy wound up marrying her. Crazy be cause he fucked her ass while she was dating the other roommates. They all had her repeatedly. Don’t know how he married her but she was a great one of the guys type girl I was told . Knowing the reality your wife fucked other guys is one thing but seeing and participating in her being used like a whore is another. My other friends cousin lived with two girls and they s as l fucked all the time . It was open house to get laid all the way around. He even one time fucked one’s mother on a night where the daughter had a date , other girl was on a trip but the mom came early so he got take out with her and had two bottles of wine . Next thing he had her on the table , over the arm of couch , on the floor , in shower and up her ass in her daughter bed. Daughter never found out

hot

Good story. 5. Some words seemed off — Pore vs pour. Heroin vs heroine. Vein vs vain. Sound alike but….

Stupid husband.

Just opened the door to trouble.

Now wife might get entitled to think hubby approves of her having sex with other men from now on.

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"So, what would happen in the morning? What would happen after that??"

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This kind of thing is just the first step to cuckolding later on. Stupid husband deserves any trouble from now on. Stupid husband.

4 Stars. Good story, are they going to become a threesome in chap. 2?

2 stars, too many mistakes.