All Comments on 'The First Time'

I lost interest after the first few paragraphs.

I understand why one comment complained about a mess, but I disagree, the boy is a mess on the subject of being a virgin yet having the girl so tantalizingly active. Having a threesome as his loss of virginity with multiple goes with each, hey, that is a mess anyone would adore finding oneself in, of course. Finally, the return visit with the request to share a fantasy has to invite anyone to admit being hooked on where this story will take the reader.

but not much. No one I cared for

I don't know what the dissenters were talking about. Sure it had a slow start but it built up and had a great finish. Keep it up.

Fucking carzy story must read

So fucking hot i orgasmed